this is not bad for a first attempt, Rebecca, but you do need to consider how the magazine is targetting its audience and who they are; what about layout and design - it is quite unusual for a cover artist not to be looking at the reader - why do you think this 'star' is looking down?; colour scheme - there is quite a minimal colour palette here etc. By the way the magazine is called Rolling Stone not Stones
this is not bad for a first attempt, Rebecca, but you do need to consider how the magazine is targetting its audience and who they are; what about layout and design - it is quite unusual for a cover artist not to be looking at the reader - why do you think this 'star' is looking down?; colour scheme - there is quite a minimal colour palette here etc. By the way the magazine is called Rolling Stone not Stones
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